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Permlink Replies: 3 - Last Post: Mar 14, 2012 9:46 PM Last Post By: jwalker1166
jwalker1166

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for the right and left of politics
Posted: Feb 17, 2012 9:27 PM
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TheTrek

Exchange your old life
for one that¿s new.
For the grace of God
is calling you.
To live out this life
in purity
Continuing
in eternity.

The path you choose
is what you¿ll get.
When it¿s time for you
to pay your debt.
Some will feel the wrath
of judgments rod
As payment
for the steps they trod.

If with angel steps
you have tread.
You¿ll find the Master
breaking bread.
He¿ll place upon you
a glory crown.
Of love that will never
let you down.

J.L. Walker
MelFamy


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Re: for the right and left of politics
Posted: Feb 25, 2012 6:52 PM   in response to: jwalker1166 in response to: jwalker1166
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Let me be the first to stand and clap. Nicely done, jw.
novembergirl89

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Re: for the right and left of politics
Posted: Mar 10, 2012 1:53 PM   in response to: jwalker1166 in response to: jwalker1166
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I like it. It flows pretty smooth, but the last stanza gets somewhat choppy--but just my opinion. :)

Have you thought about sending this to the Lutheran Digest?
jwalker1166

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Re: for the right and left of politics
Posted: Mar 14, 2012 9:46 PM   in response to: novembergirl89 in response to: novembergirl89
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Nope.